Zanza the superhero...sorta XD

[b][u]Generic Information
Name: Jack
-Nickname: Zanza
-Alias: The Flash Fire
Age: 17
Gender: male

Appearance Information
Picture: Avatar
Description: My charcter is my avatar. Long fire red hair that Zanza has had since birth. Zanza weres special fire and wind ressitant clothing at all times. He had arm guards that he uses for blocking and he has boots that match his pants and arm guards that he also wears constantly. The medailin around Zanzas neck will be in hi history.
Hair Color: Red
Eye Color: Red
Skin Color: White
Height: 6'0"
Weight: 210
Clothing: As i described earlyer fire and wind retartand clothing.
Body Type: Muscular

Personality Information
Personality: Zanza has a seprisinly cool deminre despite his powers. He isnt the time to snap at a moments notice it actually takes a long while to get him riled up. On the other hand he is extreamly cocky. He never fears an oppenet or a fight but hes not stupid either he knows that if he must he will retreat. Its an advantage to geting his anger under ata young age. Hes learned how to mold it into being useful for other activeties like planing revenge.
Likes: Arson, Murder, swords, guns, explosions.
Dislikes: You, Him, Her, Them
Fears: Fears are for the irrational
Personal Strengths: Is cockyness a strength?
General Traits: FIRE!!
Theme Song:
Catchphrase: BURN!

Superhero/School Information
Powers: lvl 6 Fire: complete fire and heat control
-Point Cost: 10 pts
-Remaining: 18pts
Powers: Level 5 Super Speed: able to run at 200 MPH
-Point Cost: 10 pts
-Remaining: 8 pts
Powers: Level 4 Super Strength: able to lift 2000 lbs
-Point Cost: 8 pts
-Remaining: 0 pts
Super-suit: Its what he always wears.
Grade: Senior

Item Information
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Pet Information
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Background/RP Information
History: Zanza was a fairly normal baby. He was the child of newly weds. Then when he was three he fell out his crib and hurt himself. The pain led to anger and befor anyone knew what had happened the building had burned down around him and killed both his reletavies with him. Zanza who had "been a miracle" survived the fire unscratched. So he went to live with relatives. About a month later there house burned down from unknown causes. In the mean time dectives figured out that it wasnt a natural fire that it had been arson and started on the floor of the babies room. The assumption was that someone was trying to kill the baby when the aunt and uncles house burned down. So naturally the family went into protective custody. Not a month into protective custody there house burned down. This time the aunt and uncle were caught in it. The goverment knew that Zanza had more family. but decided for his and there sake to keep him away so Zanza got bounced from foster home to foster home after each burned down after the next. About the time Zanza was 6 he had been in his latest home about a month when a dcf worker came to do an evaluation. Everything was in prime condition but the women noticed Zanza playing with matches. When she asked about that the foster women explained it was all she could do to keep him calm. The DCF worker wasnt very happy. So she tried to speak to Zanza he fled at an insanley high speed away from her for his age. The DCF worker reported this information to the state and they assumed the foster women had fed the child crack or somehting and tried to shut her down. When they came into to do so Zanza wasnt happy. It was one of the few foster care parents that at least tried to help him. When they grabbed him he was furious he killed the officer holding him by dislocating his arm and then tearing off his head. After words he used insane speed and strength for a full grown man to kill everyone else in the house and then burn it to the ground. At that point Zanza became a child who slipped through the cracks. After wandering the street for a few weeks he burned down a convinet store and the goverment had found him again. They took him in useing tranquilizers. Once inside Zanza stayed in the juvinal detention system until he was 10. At which point he had his first visitor every. The man Explain to him that there was a special shool for children like him and that he could either sit in the lead cell and rot or come with him. Zanza chose the school. Zanza started with exceptionaly poor grades because he had missed his first few years of schooling. So Zanza spent his first 2 years playing some insane mental catch up but by the start of his 3rd year he was getting C's and was caught up mentally. As for powers Zanza took to controling his powers as they were natural because to him they were. All he did in the cell was learn how to control them. By his sophmor year most of the kids had gotten alot closer to him in power control which he was always A+ in and as for Zanza he had raised himself to a B+ average. Junior year was more improvement and as for senior year Zanza is aiming for A+ across the board. Now as for Zanza time spent there it wasnt all that diffrent from being a normal child catching up. Originaly he got picked on in written class for not knowing how to read. All the picking on him stopped when one kid had insulted Zanza to the point of breaking The child was cocky cause his one ability was super speed and he was the fastest in the school. Zanza used super speed to get close and chase but it was a losing battel so he used his strength to propell himself foward by grabing things and pulling and then pushing off of. Zanza caught him because the amatur hadnt learned how to watch out for things so when they reached on end of the school and a door was closeing as the man backwards he went through it. Zanza caught him and nearly killed him. After that the rudeness stopped but so did any kindness except from the teachers but Zanza could see through there fake smiles. Zanza slowlyy made freinds and got a control on his anger so by senior year he was a whole diffrent person....or is he?

Family
-Father: -Unknown-
-Mother: -Unknown-
-Siblings: -Unknown-
-Others: -Unknown-
RP Sample:
OCC: This is from one of the naruto sites im on its 6303 words ^^ if you bother to read it i hope you like it.

Zanza stepped into his house. "Father im home!" He called. At first there was no response but a moment later his fahter came walking down the hallway towards him. Zanza's father spoke "How did it go?" Zanza was semi offeneded "I passed like i always do" He snapped Zanza's father just stared him down until he mubled "Sorry" His father nodded his hea din approval. "Now that youve returned what jutsu do you wish to learn next?" His father asked Zanza shook his head "None" His father looked suprised. "None? then what are you going to train for? You cant seriously think i would let you lounge around here all day reading do you? I suppose you could do missions but wihtout a team they would all be low ranking." Zanza jsut listened as his father mumbled on. "I want my Sharingan." Zanzas father looked suprised. Your sharingan?im not so sure your ready fot it." Zanza got angry almost imeadetly. "WHY NOT IM A JOUNIN ARENT I? THATS WHEN YOU TAUGHT SIS HERS" Zanzas father showed more anger then zanza knew he felt snapping back his father shouted "She had much more experince than you." Zanza was quick with his tounge "But she wasnt better than i am now" With the words out there Zanzas fahter got quite Zanza could see the anger in his face but he wasnt shouting anymore he wasnt saying anything at all. Zanza began to get worried but then his father sat down in fornt of him. Zanza noticed him motion for Zanza to sit. A moment later they were sitting across from each other. "This is going to take some serious concentration and time and most of your chakara are yous ure you want to do this?" Zanza smirked "Would i be sitting here if i wasnt ready?" Zanzas father bowed his head slightly and said "Fair enough." Riseing to his feet His father began to strach momentairly as he did Zanza stood to. They both stood roughly 6 feet tall stairing into his fathers eyes he was staring as them solid black he blinked and a moment later they were glowing red with three tomoes withing them. Zanza flinched slightly he always knew his father has them but he had never seen them befor. Zanza flinched and it saved him as he flinched backwards a fist went flying past his face hiting only the tip of his noes. Zanza tryed to leap backwards but his fathers other hand had grabbed his shirt and pulled rippoing his foward while his toher fist came backwards across the path it had just taken elbowing him in the face. A moment later Zanza was on the floor in tears as blows seemed to come from every angel Zanza herd the ocasional cruch of bones breaking. After what seemed like an enternity his father finnaly stopped. "At least she didnt cry" Zanza hated him for this he hated his father for always looking down on him and he hated him for that comment. His sister had always been top of the calss and Zanza envied her. Now he hated his father for comparing them and he began to hate his sister. Zanza rose to his feet. "Im not done yet" He said Zanzas father spun on his heal and came charging back and began the process again of beating him to a bloddy pulp at least this time it was on the other side which didnt hekp since now he was lying on a broken arm. As his father continued to beat on him Zanzas hate only grew finally he closed his eyes and snapped in rage. Although he didnt know how he did it he was starting to predict what was going to happen he was wrong ocaionaly at least every other blow but he was predicting some of them. Zanza rolled away and rose to his feet this tim balencing on his legs which ere bruised slightly but otherwise unharmed since they werent targeted. "You pass" His father said Zanza didnt understand until he spun his head and looked into the mirror on the wall hs had his Sharingan and his first tomoe. Zanza smiled widely he was happy to achive something of such a feat to him. A moment later Zanza could hear feet stomping down the hall. "What the hell is all the noise about?" a voice hollared from the other side of the door befor it flung it open. It was Zanza's sister hinata she had a very angry look on her face and she had even gone through the trouble to activate her sharigan. As she entered Zanza just stared at the three tomoes in her eyes in jealousy. Zanza didnt stop stareing he just spaced everything around him began to fade away till all he saw was the eyes. Zanza was snapped back to attention as his arm got grabbed. The pain shot through it he knew it was broken. Zanza collapsed to the floor in pain it had been to much for his legs to bear in his current state. After a moment he noticed his sister standing over him shouting something but he couldnt hear a thing she was saying all he could hear was the pounding of his head. A moment later he could see nothing either since he had passed out.

Zanza blinked is eyes open he was staring at the plain tan of the ceiling. Zanza looked around all he saw was a white curtain to his left and near his feet. above him was a wall the same tan color as the ceiling. To his right was a window Zanza was curious so he attempted to sit up. As he did pain shot through his arms so he fell back to the bed imeadetly. He continued to look out the window though. He could see an antena just the tip of it and the rest of his veiw was the sky. It was nothing but grey clouds blanketing the sky. Zanza looked at the curtain again noticing the stand beside him. It was a small brown table with a draw cut out on its front. Atop it was 2 books with bookmarks sticking out of the top of both. The on on the bottom was spun so the binding was away from him. The other one was semi spun but still couldnt see the binding. Zanza hated himself for eveng etting in this postion. He tried to move his arms again they were mostly healed all that was left was the actualy bone which medical ninjutsu couldnt due on the budget his family was willing to spend on training damages. Zanza tested his hands they worked fine as did his arms but it was extreamly painfull to evena ttempt to move them. After a few hours of sliping in and out of consiousness Zanza had been listening to voices outside his door as they walked by occasionally but now one stopped at his door. It sounded like to female voices. A moment later Zanza herd the door open and could hear the women walk in Zanza couldnt make out there conversation but Zanza reconized one of the voices it was hinata. A moment later the curtain flew open. Zanza could now see the rest of the room and it was no diffrent than his corner just tan walls and ceiling and a few other white curtians. "Oh look whos awake." The chipper nurse said. She was in a white coat that went to about her wait with tschirt like sleeves and a skirt that stopped just above her kneew he bouncy pink curls almost annoyed Zanza. Hinata on the other hand had long black hair that came down off her shoulders to stop at her chest. She was waering her usaly light blue shirt we it was more dress length but she had a black belt on to sperate the skirt portion from the shirt portion with long sleeved black shirt under neath with tight black pants. Zanza glanced at the chiper nurse as she spoke befor dropping his head again. Hinata could read Zanzas thoughts at that point. "Id like to vist with my brother alone if you dont mind. The nurse snapped her haed and dropped the smile real quick. "Huh? OH! Oh, yeas of course" With a semi drepressed smile she walked away to other patients. Once the nurse was out of ear shot Zanza whispered "Thank you" Hinata put her hand up to signal for Zanza to shut up then reached for the books on the table. Picking up the top one Zanza saw the binding it was one of her romance novels. The other book she placed in his hands befor leaning foward to prop up his bed. Zanza Saw the book title it was one he had been reading at night befor bed. Zanza smiled at hinata and began to thank her again but she stopped him simply stateing "Tell anyone i did this and ill kill you."

Weeks went by and Zanza got his arms back once they were fully healed Zanza was home reading when he herd something. Walking into the main room he saw his sister returning home from a mission. "What do you want?" She asked almost angry that he was even there. Zanza rasied his hand holding up 2 fingers as he did he activated his sharigan. Any idot could tell he was asking for his second sharigan. Hinata smiled lightly befor waveing him on as she lead down the hall to the training room. Entering she glanced back momentairly and watched as Zanza closed the door behind him. As sson as he loked foward with sharigan still activated she back stepped and kicked up towards his chin. It connected with a crushing blow. Zanza got to his feet and began to circle slightly. She turned his back on him. Big mistake Zanz though so he charged Just as she reached him she repeated the move. Zanza again went flying backwards. Rising to his feet Again Zanza's jaw hurt she wasnt holding back jsut because they were siblings. Zanza rose to his feet again this time She was staring right at him as soon as the 2 locked eyes everything in the area began to blur slightly and Zanzas body seemed to be melting Zanza knew isntantly he was in genjutsu he could easyly break with a genjutsu release but he didnt want to he wanted to see through it. A moment later befor Zanza could break it he was flying through the air again. She had kicked him in the jaw again. Zanza stood up this time with hsi back to her. She began to walk towards him once in range Zanza copyed the move inch for inch unlike Zanza though she simply side stepped it and began to giggle. Zanza didnt understand why until he felt the pain he had copyed a move that put him in close to a total split a postion he wasnt used to or comfortable with. Falling to his knees in pain hinata came over and patted him on the shoulder as Zanza looked up she was holding a mirror from the wall. Zanza blinked momentairly befor looking into it to see tomoe number 2.

Zanza rose to his feet slowly still hunched in pain. Hinata grabbed his arm and threw it over her shoulder and helped Zanza limp to the door. Sliding it open they passed through and hinata closed it with her foot as the continued down the hall. A moment later they were at his room. Hinata let him lean agains the wall for a moment. Zanza watched as she slid open the door and then disappered into it. Zanza could hear lots of shuffeling going on int the room but couldnt tell what it was. A moment later she exited the room and helped him hobbel into it. As they entered Zanza saw what she had done she had semi cleaned it there had been clothes and books everywhere only moments befor she took all the books and put the on the top shelves of his "To Read" bookshelf and with amazing speed managed to throw all his clothes into a neat pile in one corner of the room. Zanza was amazed until he glaned at her and noticed the sharigan activated. He was suprised that she used it. He didnt realize the rush until he was the clock next to his bed. There father would be home any minute and she would need to get back to her room befor that happened or else she would be in trouble. Father was suppose to be the teach for both of them if he found out she had helped him with his 2 tomoe training he would most likey kill her. As Zanza thought this he realized that kill her was a bit of an exsaturation there father could be cold at times but kill? Zanza doubted it unless it was a kill or be killed situation. As he sat on the bed and leaned back against the wall Zanza started out the window. Zanza had the largest room in the house not by more than a foot but it was larger than there parents and hinatas rooms was a few feet smaller than there parents room but she prefered it that way. Zanza didnt do anything special to get the room his parnets just knw that he would appreciate the window view the most. So he got it. That and siince mom was pregnant and expecting any day now they had moved him in there 6 months ago and were planing to put the baby in there with him. Zanza didnt know why since he was the heavyest sleeper but it was suppose to be that so he would learn to not sleep so deeply. Zanza didnt quite understand the reasoning. Hinata disappered frm the room only to reapper a minute later with a towel wrapped around something. Dropping it on his crotch Zanza realized it was ice. Looking at her to say thank you she was gone again. However befor she left again Zanza saw the look of fear in her eyes she had also deactivated her sharingan. Zanza grabbed a book and began to read while he iced the sore waiting for father to come home.

Zanza had been reading diligently for a while when his stomach grumbled. Looking at it momentairly befor glanceing at the clock. Zanza went back to his book for a moment befor the time registered. Father was 4 hours late and mother was 2 hours late. This could only mean 1 thing. Mom was giving birth. Leaping to his feet the half melted bag of ice fell to the floor. As did Zanza he had iced his legs for to long and they had gone numb. After a minute of straining to get the feeling back Zanza took the ice to the kitchen and dumped it in the sink befor throwing out the bag and hanging the towel on the drying rack. Zanza looked out the window down the street to make sure they werent coming. Returning to his room Zanza threw on his street clothes. Long blue baggy pants. They were always comfortable to him no matter how funny they looked. Slipping on his matching boots Zanza spun his head wildly looking for his wrist guards once finging them he pulled them on as well throwing on a KSE tshit and a light zip up hoodie Zanza walked down the hall to his sisters room. The door was closed and Zanza had learned from past experinces to knock first. Knocking Zanza awaited a responce. Zanza herd a shuffeling her room a moment later she flung open the door. She was wearing the same outfit from the day he woke up in the hospital. with a think black jacket with fur around the hood on she put on the hood and zipped up the jacket. "I dont know how you survive in those hoodies little bro. Anyways lets go. A moment later she took off down the hall and out the door Zanza was right behind her step for step they were running to the hospital.

Arriving She entered and ran straight for the stairs. Hinata had visted multiple times befor with mom so Zanza assumed that she already knew what floor they would be on. Bursting out of the hall way she walked calmly to the nurses desk. Zanza stood at the stairwell waiting an answer as to which direction to go. Zanza watched as her face went white. Zanza was curious so he took one step foward befor stopping she was walking towards him. She was still white. "What happened?" Zanza asked Hinata shook her head and walked into the stair well Zanza followed. between floors the stairs evened out to make a u turn Zanza grabbed hinatas shoulder here and pulled her against the wall. "What happened?" Hinata sunk to the floor and began to cry. Zanza didnt ask again. He had a hunch. "The baby?" Hinata choked out a "yes" Zanza shook his head. "Its okay at least mom's okay right?" Zanza asked as more of a retorical question but the answer he got put him on his ass. Hinata shook her head and choked on her words again as she said "Shes dead too." Zanza almost began to cry himself. He knew that his father woudlnt let him hear the end of it. Zanza hunched down and put his left arm under hinata's knee's and his other arm around her back and lifted her. Zanza walked down the stairs and out the front door. It was a somober site Zanza had a death glare on his face and Hinata in his arms crying. Arriving home Zanza slid open the door with his foot. Stepping inside he closed it behind him. Walking down the hallway to hinatas room he placed her on her bed and pulled off her shoes real qucik befor pulling the comforter over her. Walking back to his room all that could be herd through out the house was her crying. Zanza continued to read he wasnt paying attention to the book his mind was to busy foucusing on his eyes and keeping them dry. Zanza fell asleep leaned against the wall sitting on his bed to the sound of his sister crying down the hall.

Zanza awoke to his alarm clock going off. Leaping to his feet he raced down the hall and slid the door to his sisters room open quitely. Reaching in he shut off her alarm clock. Zanza's clock was fast for some reason so it always went off about a minute to early which is why he was able to to do this in time. As he went to leave her room she spoke. "Thanks" Zanza snapped his head back around he wasnt sure if he had her voice or not she was faceing the wall away from him. She looks over he shoulder at him Her face was the sadened and the tear stains on her cheeks didnt help. Zanza realized the reason she wasnt crying was because she was dehydrated not because she was done. Zanza stepped out and went to the kitchen and grabbed an epty jug he filled it with water and returned ot her room placeing it on the floor beside her Zanza leaned over and kissed her on the cheeck whispering "Im sorry" Befor walking out into the hallway closeing the door behind him. A moment later Zanza was out the door. He had a job to do. Arriving at the mission giveing building Zanza slowly climbed the stairs and stood in line. Beside him was a bunch of teams comprised of jounin and a few genin for each team. Zanza noticed a few of the jounin and reconized them from his class as a kid. Zanza stood by and watched as 1 of the 3 teams in front of him got there mission. Then the next stepped up as they did 2 other teams walked in behind him. Zanza reconized both instantly one was the boy and his mutt and the other was the senju girl both had been on his team as a genin. in tow behind the 2 of them was 6 little kids all of which Zanza assumed were genin. The 2 were whispering back and forth from the ocasionaly giggle Zanza could tell the 2 were flirting and completely ignoreing there genin. As the tean that was in front of him stepped up to receive a misson Zanza took a step to the side to take the place where they had been standing indicating he was next. As they went to leave Zanza tried to step foward but couldnt Instintively the hisui moved along with the girl followed by there genin foward. Zanza glanced down wood had gone over the top of his feet to keep him from walking. Zanza listend as they asked if the 2 teams could join together for a little team vs team match. Zanza knelt down and used his earth mastery to break away the wood. Stepping up Zanza put an arm around each of the jounin and spoke up. "Ill play proctor." He said it with a huge smile on his face. The smile was fake but the kage wasnt paying enough attention to notice. So he simply nodded his head.

About 20 minutes later they arrived at the training ground. Zanza watched as the genin faught patheticlly he knew as well as the 2 jounin sitting on the other side of the clearing that this was teaching them nothing. Zanza spoke up "Hey genin come here all 6 of you" The genin instinctively obeyed. Zanza watched what the 2 jounin would do but they were so involved with eachother thay didnt even notice. As the genin approched Zanza spoke. "New mission your teams job is to tie up you jounin leader the first team to do that and drag there jounin to me wins. Deal?" Most of the genin smiled at the chance. After a group of quick nods the genin took off running. 10 minutes later all 6 genin were tied up and dropped at his feet and the other 2 were in his face. Zanza was sitting up right on a rock so even with the other 2 standing they were eye to eye. The 6 genin all looked over exsesivly beaten and tied Zanza even notice 1 or 2 that had passed out. The senju girl was in his face first "What the hell do you think your doing ordering our genin to attck us?" She was keeping her distance as to stay out of arms reach but the hisui wawsnt as smart. The dog was paceing growling as he got about a foot from Zanzas face. Granning Zanzas shirt he slightly lifted him. "Whats the big idea punk?you get you kicks from this?" The truth was that Zanza didnt he was jsut trying to show these 2 that they didnt have the right to be jounin but they beat up some genin so at least they werent genin level. The feild they were in was nothing but sand and rocks.the area itself was outlines by 3 fence walls and a huge rock cliff. Zanza was wearing the same thing he had worn to the hospital minus the jacket. Zanza removed his tshirt and stood on the rock. Leaping over the top of the 2 jounin Zanza turned and stuck ahand out waveing the 2 on. His other hand was in his pocket fidling with wire and the loop on a kunai. As the2 charged at him Zanza pulled the cord and kunai from his pocket spinning it above his head the kunai spun on the wire around faster and faster. until all that could be seen was the blur of the kunai. The hisui got cocky and had the dog charge in low while he lept high. As they did this Zanza dug into his pouch for more wire and another kunai. The current spinning one was adjusted and went low wrapping around the front paws of the dog zanza pulled foward instantly you could tell by the yelp the dog gave it had broken some thing. As the dog yelped Zanza removed the string and kunai form his other pocket and shot them out in a curve towards the man. He put arm in defense unfourtunetly this had dire consiquencs for him as he did the string had the same effect but as the kunai spun it dug into his shoulder and not stoping until it hit bone which it simply deflected off of. Zanza spuns his body ripping the string from the mans arm and the dogs legs and spun both on his arm once they had wrapped all the way around Zanza watched the women stare in horror. She turned to run but it was to late for her. Zanza activated his sharingan and sent one kunai out towards her. It wrapped right around her legs tripping her Zanza began to shake his free arm preparing to throw the other kunai. The arm iwht the string around her legs Zanza yanked hard on the womean screammed in pan as she came flying across the area in pain. Zanza spun he kunai above his head as she flew through the air Zanza used his sharingan to aim carefull and had the kunai go up her back until it had become jsut a blood bath. She pased out half wasy through from pain. Zanza fixed the kunai and wire and shoved them into his pouches. removing one kunai Zanza walked over to the genin and untied them. "Know what to do?" he asked all of them replied in unsion "Take them to the hospital, sir" Zanza smiled and with a nod they all took off running. Zanza left the area towards home. He didnt feel like doing a mission now. Even though he had given them the punishment he was sure they deserved he didnt feel right about it.

Arriveing home Zanza slid open the door to the kitchen and entered. Zanza began to make a sandwhich befor noticing a man sitting at the table. "Dont return." Zanza spun "What?" Zanza was looking at the kage. He didnt think it through well enough to be suprised. "I followed you to the training grounds i saw your performance. Dont return for more mission until you settel your feelings." He stood and walked towards the door sliding it open he looked at Zanza who had been watching him leave. "Your sister could use help dealing with her feelings as well. She doesnt need you getting in trouble on top of her pain." Zanza watched as the door slid closed behind the kage. There was a creak in the floorbards from behind him Zanza pun his head. There was no one in the door way but with a quick step Zanza found his sister head down on the other side of the wall. "I-" She started but instead just turned around and went back down the hall to her room and shut the door quietly behind her. Zanza sighed slightly and went straight to his room.

Days went by Zanza and hinata spend all day at home in there rooms. There father is no where to be seen. One night about 6 days after the death of there mother Zanza was sleeping in the afternon sun when he awoke to the sound of a crash coming from down the hall. Zanza grabbed his pouchs off the table beside him and strapped them to him he was wearing his arm guards and long blue pants with his boots. Sliping the door open quitely Zanza moved downt he hall with amazing grace and persison using chakra to stick to the wall and ceiling Zanza got on the ceiling and carefully opened the door to his sister room where the noise was coming from. He only opened it a crack. and activated his sharingan as he peaked it His sister was in the same clothes she had been wearing for days. She was sitting on top her desk with blood pouring from opening on her skin and clothes.the visible skin was 90% bruises that had from repetative beating. Then Zanza noticed the other person in the room it was there father. Zanza watched intentfully to frightened to move. Zanza noticed as hinata steched her trembling hand towards the door. As she did ther father spun his head. His sharingan was active as well so he took it all in and obsorbed it in a flash. Befor Zanza could movehis father had thrown somthing towards the door. As he duxked out of the way and slid to the floor beside the door he herd a crash. He reconized the sound it was a glass bottel the only thing that came in glass bottels was alchol Zanza had herd storyies of his father being an abusive drunk but he hand never seen he father drink and ounce of liquor in his life so he didnt see how it could be true. As Zanzas head was spinning his father had moved to the door and flung it open. "Well dont just sit there come watch." He said as he did he grabbed Zanzas neck and dragged him into the room. Zanza was so struck with fear he just stood there and watched as his father walked over to his sister and pulled her from the desk Standing faceing Zanza hinata looked as if she was dead. There father moved around behind hinata and placed his hand on her shoulders. Then a cruel smile came across his face Zanza wouldnt of even noticed if it wasnt for his sharingan. A moment later his right arm swung wide with his left hand still on her shoulder.

Her head bounced off the wall. Zanza fell to his knees pukeing on the floor as he did. "Whats the matter boy didnt i always say id knock your head off your shoulders?" Zanza looked up in horror not at there father but at his sisters face her head had rolled in front of him face staring right at him. Zanza took off out the bedroom door and down the hall. Zanza felt a sharp kick to the back and he went flying past the ktichen and throught the training room door. Befor Zanza could rise to his feet he was grabbed and thrown again. Instead of hitting the wall he went through it and rolled into the street. There were people all around that instantly moved back to form a large circle. "COME ON BOY" His father barked as he stepped out of the hole "We gotta put on a show for these nice people" As his father spoke we wore the same crule smile that he had moments befor. Zanza rose to his feet as his father laughed at his own cruel joke. Zanza was furious he coudlnt stop glareing at the man. He knew he couldnt beat him in a fair fight let alone the handicap he already had but Zanza didnt care. His father shot off a jutsu Zanza reconized it instantly and copied it move for move it was great fireball technique. The look on his fathers face was still a cruel smile but never the less Zanza's fear began to disapte as his anger grew. Zanza's father began to do hand signs Zanza mimiced them sign for sign and unleashed another fire jutsu it was Fire Dragon Flame Missile Zanza knew this one as well. His father cruel smile faded as the flames died Zanza hadnt only copyed his move Zanza fire had been stronger. "Looks like ill just have to plain out kick you ass the old fashion way boy." his father sneered Zanza didnt care anymore he was to furious. His hate had grown into a pure white hatred of his father. Zanza decided to use the trick he had used a few days befor. Shoveing his hands into his pocket he began to fidle with wire and 2 kunai. A moment later Zanza pulled his hadns out a kunai in each spining them in circles on the side of them slowly leting the circles grow larger and large until he was spinning both above hsi head useing his sharincan to time it so the wires didnt cross. Zanza whipped both at his father one from the right and one from the left. Exsatcly as he predicted his father put up a defense just like the hisui boy. As he did this Zanza yanked on the strings to adjust the length they would be when the hit his wrists. His father didnt budge meanin he didnt see the significance of it untill it was to late As the wire hit his arms the blades swung inward to wrap however due to the length the blade tips swung inwards on his neck falling just shy of his spin Evey part of his fathers neck became severed except the spine. The look on his fathers face was still the cruel smile but Zanza didnt care after carveing into hsi neck the blades continued to spin until they wrapped around his wrists. Zanza yanked as hard as he could his fathers body came flying towards him head first with arms sstreched forward. Zanza waited until he was close enough befor kicking outward. The kick connected decapitating hsi father completely. Removing the string and kunai from his fathers wrists. Zanza hobbeled into the hole in the wall. Then down the hall and slid open the door. Stepping over her slouched body zanza opens the desk drawer. Pulling out a needle and some thread Zanza went to the task of retaching her head.

Once Done Zanza sat with her body until the kage showed up 5 minutes later in battle gear. The door slid open and he was standing there awaiting the counter attck. Zanza didnt attck he just sat there stareing at the man. Almost asking the question of why. The kage shook his head and signaled to the men behind him to leave. Stepping inside the kage knelt down and spoke. "Its okay you dont need to be ready anymore." Zanza flinched at his words "Huh?" The kage looked around momentairly befor standing and opening a drawer on the desk after suffeling for a moment. He pulled out a mirror and showed it to Zanza he some how sitll had his sharingan activated and it had 3 tomoes. Zanza snatched the mirror from the kages hand and smashed it on the floor beside him. "Dont show me my father's eyes." The kage stood tall and walked to the door fo the room stepping out he looked back "There your eyes now" and with that he was gone.

Zanza was furious at the kages words a moment later he felt blood on his eyes and dripping down his cheeks. There was a family picture on the floor it was the one that the family had taken the day Zanza got his sharingan everyones eyes were activated to there highest degree. Zanza noticed his fathers eyes they were the legendary Mangekyo Zanza was furious the Mangekyo was the 4th stage of the uchiha eyes they were almost a myth to most people. Zanza was almost ready to explode he rembered reading about them and the power they held but the dire consiquences they had aperntly they only way to keep them was to ahve someone else implant they Mangekyo on you ot else you would go blind with your own. Zanza was furious he was glareing at the picture in hatred pure black hatred a moment later black flames engulfed the picture. Zanza reconized it imeadetly "Amaterasu" the words slid from his lips. Zanza rose to his feet Sister body left on the floor. Zanza walked down the hall to the kitched where the kage was sitting. On the floor was his fathers body with the head sitting at the top. Zanza walked over to his fathers body and grabbed the head off the floor. Zanza glanced at the kage "Transplant them" Zanza brought the head to the kage. The kage bowed his head momentairly befor poping out the mans eyes. The body guards that were standing around stared intently and wide eyed they couldnt belive what they were seeing. Zanza grabbed a chair and sat directly in front of the kage. He reach up and ripped out Zanzas right eye. Quickly placeing in a new one and healing it almost instantly and then repeating the process with the other eye. Zanza blinked a few times the eyes felt exsactly the same. No diffrent then befor. Zanza looked at one of the guards a moment later he was on the ground chokeing and gasping for air. "Tsukiyomi" the kage said aloud the other guard freaked out and ran to his partner "Amekage sama do something i beg of you" A moment later they were dead Zanza had used insane speed to cut both of there heads off as well. The kage stood "I suggest we leave befor more come." Zanza snapped his head back and nodded. As they exited the house and began to walk down the street the kage put his hand out. "Burn it" He said aloud. Zanza turned around and cast Amaterasu on the house. That was the last time Zanza saw his family or house. About a week later reconstruction began but it wasnt the same building design so it didnt matter.

Grade Senior, denied. You may only start at a maximum of Freshman.

I talked to nico and ill take the freshman point. So heres the edit to the points other wise everything else is still the same.

Freshman = 20 points

lvl 6: complete fire and heat control - 10 pts
Level 2: able to run at 90 MPH - 5 pts
Level 2: able to lift 1000 lbs - 5 pts

10+5+5=20

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