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PostSubject: Zero Sukio   Tue Feb 16, 2010 6:01 pm

Generic Information
Name:Zero Sukio
-Nickname: Z
-Alias: Zero
Age: 15
Gender: male

Appearance Information
Picture:
Description: Zero wears a black shirt with red vertical bold lines. Zero also wears a black jacket with red lines around the collar sleeves and zip. Zero wears joggers that are black with red lines down the sides. Zero wears red and black trainers too that Josh bought him he got in to the Freshmen class when he was 15. All of Zero's clothes part from the trainers were bought by Zero.
Hair Color:Purple
Eye Color:Havel
Skin Color: Pale
Height: 5'6"
Weight:130lbs
Clothing: avi
Body Type:four pack

Personality Information
Personality: Zero is the quiet but strong type and all ways protect girl who are being attacked also he is envious of his Big Brother Josh who is a Junior at his school and is always trying to beat him in any way. Zero want to be the best SuperHero and wants to save the world. Zero always is shy around girls and finds it hard to speak to them.
Likes: fruit, girls, quiet spots and lunch time, Training Sports
Dislikes: strong acting people but nothing more
Fears:none
General Traits: Tai Style Kick Boxing Master nothing more
Theme Song: Linkin Park In The End
Catchphrase: "Great here comes the party crasher" or "Hm..." or "..."

Superhero/School Information
Powers: lvl 6: complete lightning and electricity control
-Point Cost:11
-Remaining: 9
Powers:lvl 5: complete fire control
-Points Cost:8
-Remaining:1
Super-suit: He is wearing it
Grade: Freshmen

Background/RP Information
History: Zero was born in to a good family of a loving mother who died in child birth and father with a older brother Josh who partly bought Zero up but Zero's father trained Zero the starters of Tai Style Kick Boxing but after their father died at the age of eight but Josh was ten but when Josh turned 11 he joined the academy and left Zero in his Dorm but when Zero turned 11 him self he joined his brother now 13 in the academy.

During his time in the first to third year of the Academy he learned all forms of Tai Style Kick Boxing and in full control of Lightning and electricity which he can use to make his attacks more fast and creating more damage to the enemy or sparring mate and when Josh became 17 and now a Junior and Zero became a Freshmen and 15 and they became rivals so, Zero carried on training to become better then his Older Brother.
Family
-Father: Dead
-Mother: Dead
-Siblings: Josh(Brother)
RP Sample:
Zero and Josh are sparring and zero generates lightning in to his feet and dashes at Josh as well as generating lightning in to his fist and launches a few quick but powerful punches which Josh easily blocks and counters Zero attack and hurls him over his shoulder and as Zero lands on to the floor he quickly spins his arm in the turning cycle to hurl his leg to trip Josh up.

Josh falls to the floor then gets up. Zero gets up to and lunges at Josh with a hurricane of kicks and punches infused with lightning and speed but stop and so does Josh

"Havn't I gotten better right?" Zero asks his older brother and he moved his Havel eyes to the movement of the birds in the sky.


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PostSubject: Re: Zero Sukio   Tue Feb 16, 2010 7:02 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Zero Sukio   Tue Feb 16, 2010 7:46 pm

"Body Type=O+"
What? Is that like...Obesity+10 points? Or did you mean O+ Blood type? o_O

"Personality: Zero is the quiet but strong type and all ways protect girl who are being attacked also he is envious of his Big Brother Josh who is a Junior at his school and is always trying to beat him in any way.
Likes: fruit, girls, quiet spots and lunch time
Dislikes: strong acting people
Fears:none
General Traits: Tai Style Kick Boxing Master"

Add more to all of this please.
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PostSubject: Re: Zero Sukio   Tue Feb 16, 2010 7:50 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Zero Sukio   Tue Feb 16, 2010 8:11 pm

You need at least another paragraph for personality. Also, you need another paragraph for your characters description. Clothing should also be written in a paragraph.
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PostSubject: Re: Zero Sukio   Tue Feb 16, 2010 10:39 pm

Yeah, here are a few suggestions:
Personality: Try going into detail about your characters dislikes. How he acts around girls, his goals, etc.
Description: Just lengthen the paragraph a bit, I suppose. You don't have to add another paragraph.
Clothing: Nico, clothing is optional. o.O
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PostSubject: Re: Zero Sukio   Wed Feb 17, 2010 4:48 am

Oh sorry, I was thinking about the avatar site. xP
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PostSubject: Re: Zero Sukio   Wed Feb 17, 2010 5:57 am

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PostSubject: Re: Zero Sukio   Wed Feb 17, 2010 2:35 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Zero Sukio   Wed Feb 17, 2010 3:34 pm

Hmmmm
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PostSubject: Re: Zero Sukio   Wed Feb 17, 2010 3:35 pm

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