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PostSubject: jeremy [WIP]   Sun Feb 14, 2010 9:24 pm

Generic Information
Name: Jeremy
-Nickname: [optional] Jer
-Alias: none
Age: 12
Gender: Male

Appearance Information
Hair Color: ice blue hair when in ice form. when in normal form has blond hair.
Eye Color: his eyes are blue in his ice form, when in normal form has green eyes.
Skin Color: his skin is iced over and light blue, when in normal form his skin is white but tanned
Height: his hight is about 5'6" and no change in height when in ice form or normal form.
Weight: his weight is about 106 lbs. in normal form but in ice form he weighes about 116 lbs.

Personality Information
Personality: he is like his powers not cold but transparent. He's devastatingly honest. He is very up-front with his emotions and his thoughts all the time.Also, he's obviously incredibly brave both in terms of facing external, physical danger as well as facing up to unpleasant situations and admitting his own mistakes. he will overexagerate every now and then to get atention. he is also realy nose, he thinks needs to know what other people are doing and a reson why they are doing that.
Likes: like to be center of atention and for people to be honest with him. he likes to be around people but also likes to be alone when relaxing. he likes to be at partys and have every one know that he is there.
Dislikes: he hates when people lie to him. he hates to be alone for to long. dislikes to lie to to people but will if haveing to, but he realy dislikes when people play pranks on him

Superhero/School Information
Level 2: able to fly up to 200 feet before tiring - 4 pts
lvl 6: complete water and ice control - 10 pts
-Point Cost: 14
-Remaining: 0
Super-suit: his body gets covered in ice
Grade: 7th grade

Background/RP Information
History: Jeremys parents were both in the united states military.They were married on a navy ship.they were placed in the same platoon and were happy through the years of war.They never thought they would have a child in the middle of combat.His father rushed to the med. tent, but was too late jeremy smith was already born on 1988.

as he got older he got better in combat,learning how to take care of him day around the age of seven his parents were visited by a high ranking cournal,they said they had to go for a long time and that he would have to go with the men.months passed and one day the docter came and asked if he wanted to help with a expirement,he said no but the man said he would see his parents again if he helped.he immediatly changed his answer and was taken to a big confine with a big building with lights.

he entered a great machine with tubes everywhere,the man said to jeremy read the black book when you come out.jeremy said ok and closed his eyes and rested,then a big wave of chill hit him but only for half a second then nothing.he entered a cryogenic sleep uknowing to him he slept for ten years not aging at all or having any recolation of the sleep in his mind it was for seconds.he entered the room again, it looked dimmer ,lights were burnt out strangly.he saw a black binder on the table, dust coated it.he walked over opened it and saw a mushroom cloud with writing under it.the book told him about the years major enents.

all ten years put into 60 pages,the truth was hard to swallow,he slowly got down on his knees and cried he threw the book, pages flew everywhere.when he got up he noticed somthing he read about,green paper slips.he picked up all he could find and conted it, it was 3,000 dollars.he headed out the dorr and walked outside and looked over his shoulder and noticed the building was very damaged and covered in vines.

he walked to store after store gathering things he read about cloths, food,and a place to stay.he started living around others and observing there ways.when he was 8 he was walking to his place while counting his money.two men came up to him and said give me the money kid and you can go home to moma.he stepped back and ran back into a dead end ally he stopped backed up against the wall and put his hand over his face.he waited for at least 30 seconds and looked and saw the men were frozen solid.he apperantly was fused with the liquid from the machine.

a year later he had perfected his ice power.he used it in every day life now.unkowingly he was being day he was aproched by a kid about the same age, who said he had a oppertunity of a life time.he said he was like him,with speacial abilities.prove it he said,the boy touched his watch.his skin melted away and under it was a metal face and metal skin.come with me if you want to fit in soon they were best friends in there new school for speacial people.
Family Smith
-Father: Cory Smith
-Mother: Carla Smith
-others: zink rosebud [friend]
RP Sample:
Making his way over to the training Area Gintoki seemed to be stuck in deep thought for some strange reason he had trouble taking his mind off what the kazekage had previously said to him, and to add to the matter he had to meet his young new genin at the Suna training field. Gintoki's face looked unkempt and dark circles looked like they had formed from accumulating sleep deprivation, his thick white hair was messy and frizzled yet his look magnified his personality even more than he knew. His lazy attitude and general lack of respect for anyone and everything was very apparent so it was easy to imagine he was the last Jonin to receive a Student. His thoughts on the matter looked bleak he could almost assume that the Kazekage paired him with one of the misfits or rejects that they were sick of harboring over at the academy. But it dint phase Gin he just pressed on down the small dirt paved path that would eventually lead him to the meeting spot, he packed his regular quintessential items he would use in this type of situation such as his leather pouch that was attached around his belt and his Velcro holsters that he snapped on his leg.

Still trekking along down the path Gintoki's eyes ran across a small sand pit that had three small wooden poles drove deep into the earth, the first feeling that came over him was a bit of anguish as he remembered his first day being a genin and meeting his sensei in the same spot. He also recalled how his sensei used to treat his small team the hate and anger he harbored for that man was substantial, it made no sense why Gin held all that hate inside him but he couldn't come to forgive him and in a way he was glad that he had died. Slowly sauntering over to the three wooden pegs Gintoki sifted around before coming to a complete halt, as he sat atop one of the wooden poles he looked out over the desert terrain and cleared his mind. " Many things has changed, and I will not treat my successor as I had once been.." After thinking a bit he let a deep breath fill his lungs and as the cool breeze blew over him he closed his eyes for a few seconds attempting to catch up on some duly needed rest. But as the foot steps of his future student came into range Gintoki cracked his eyes to get a look.

Kichirou Ken'ichi walked slowly with his green and black trench jacket buttoned all the way up with green spiky hair. The sleeves over his hands, a puppet with green spike hear wrapped up in white Goss walks closer and closer towards the training area. thinking about what his dad said "don't let your sensei get the best of u" so Kichirou was wondering what his master would be like. he got over it and just went on. then when he got there he looked around and only saw a man sitting on a stump "hey mister are u may sensei I am supposed to meat him hear but I think I might be late and he left but I don’t know if he was hear or not so could u tell me if he was hear or are u him"

From a distance Gintoki watched as the young Genin made his way closer and closer until he was up close scanning him over a few times Gin noticed things about the boy that were peculiar and sparked his interest, the boy seemed to be fairly decent looking well dressed and his green hair was very uncommon which put him
in mind of when he was a young pup just starting out in the Academy and how he used to be teased by the other children for his strange White hair. With a keen smile Gin popped off the log rising up to stand his hands stationed at his side the white haired man listened intently the Genin's question, looking down faithfully at his hand Gin read off the name he had written upon it, " If your in fact Kichirou Ken'ichi then you would be right." Letting a few moments pass Gintoki spoke once more, " Based off description the kazekage gave me about you it seems they match up... And by the way my name is Gintoki Sakata... The white sands puppeteer..." After finishing his brief explanation Gin stretched back taking in a long yawn after a few seconds passed The Jonin reached down grasping his Canteen, popping the cap off instantly Gin pressed the hard metal to his lips while lifting it up, as the cold fresh water poured into his mouth he moved his tongue around sloshing it around. As the heat of the desert beat down on the two the day grew and in the summer months the heat never leaves, even with the sun set sunagakure was the devil's playground.

"yes my name is Kichirou Ken'ichi I graduated two years ago and they wanted me to be in a team with my class mates but it seams that there is only me" Kichirou watched the man. " so your a puppet master as well at least I will have a sensei that knows the puppet style jutsu." takes a breath " can I call u gin sensei gintoki" then takes of his puppet and stands it up and lies on it.

With a silent nod Gin tucked his hand up away in his sleeve in a split second The jonin had his hand back out and this time in his palm lay a scroll, Holding the scroll tightly in his hand he watched as his student removed his puppet from its White bandaged case, Gin's face was emotionless and as he slowly unraveled the scroll he formed a hand sign. " There has been a shortage in shinobi around here... If I have the chance I will talk to the kazekage about filling our squad.. And now I guess we will start the first phase in your training.. Show me what you can do with your puppet.." Forcing a burst of chakra out his body the scroll in his hand puffed into a cloud a smoke as it faded away slowly Gintoki was left standing behind a human figure that was covered by a black cloak, the puppets face was not yet seen it was hidden beneath its dark hood, it stood equal in size to Gin and with the slightest gust of wind the puppet started to chatter, its hollow sounds perforated through the area like the a bell sounding off..

when Kichirou was done unraveling his puppet was 3/4 as tall a Kichirou whereon the same cloths and hair "ok well this is my puppet copy cater he can look like any thing and shot out any weapon" then Kichirou starts to make chakra strings appear and then shouts out needles from the mouth of the puppet and then puts up a hand sign. the needles transform in a cloud in to a star shurican and goes in to a stump. “so what do you think is that good enough for you or do you want more"

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PostSubject: Re: jeremy [WIP]   Wed Feb 17, 2010 8:57 pm

A few more sentences for personality, and add about 2 or 3 more things for your likes and dislikes.
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PostSubject: Re: jeremy [WIP]   Wed Feb 17, 2010 9:32 pm

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